Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it?
Modernity has brought a strict definition of individuality which make people very self-centered. It is true that people show anti-social behavior and disrespect to others these days. There are several reasons for this problem and various steps can be taken by government, society, individual, parents and schools to improve this situation.
There are variety of factors behind this problem. First, there are many problems in family such as serious conflict between parents, divorce, poverty, lack of education or no role model for children. For instance, if a child is being handled by a single parent then he/she may disrespect to others. Second, the poor educational background and unemployment can lead family members to misbehave with each other. The next reason is that drugs and alcohol contribute to increase anti-social behavior in society. Because of consuming alcohol and drugs, people are not aware about their behavior which can result in committing crime.
The situation can be improved only when people understand their moral responsibility towards society. Moreover, parents have a critical role in teaching their children the difference between right and wrong. The should encourage their children to be confident and to be proud for themselves and their family. Also, young people must be taught in schools and colleges to check sense for their independence, their responsibilities towards society they live in and ask them to be a sensible human beings. Finally, the intensive supervision and surveillance program on children and adults should be one of the most effective steps.
To close, I believe that government and people can tackle this problem by educating society. However, with the proper knowledge of values and morals, this problem can be addressed.
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- An American film actor once said Tomorrow is important and precious Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present Do you agree or disagree 87
- Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'being'?
Suggestion: being
... in and ask them to be a sensible human beings. Finally, the intensive supervision and...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... morals, this problem can be addressed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, for instance, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43525179856 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85013100161 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618705035971 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1917472926 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201303509636 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685158074664 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495571426967 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127999416982 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480951225858 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.