Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is universally agreed that social media like television and movies have tremendous influence on individual's life. Although, some people count its positive effects, there are great number of people who are of the opinion that television and movies have more negative impact specially on the youngster behavior. I explicate its disadvantages with three point as supports.
First and foremost, young people think more emotionally than rationally. That is why, some of the movies and TV advertisement aim to gain benefit from their sentiments by producing emotional movie. For example, my sister is crazy about Arrows and she never miss any sessions of this movie. Although, it is not suitable for her age, she and many of her friend buy it as soon as it comes to market. On reason is They love the colorful and attractive scenery of the film, however they are not aware of the harmful impact of this movie on their thinking.
Additionally, teenager are more likely to imitate TV characters. Actually, they more incline toward copying unacceptable expressions. A vivid example is my brother. While he see the TV program which have both good and bad expression, he is always repeating ugly statement from that program.
Finally, by prevailing the immoral movies, parents are no longer able to control their teenager. Unfortunately, juveniles are in the age in which they should be impressed by their parents instruction instead they take effect from hostile program which destroy the train of parents. For instance, I know a family that their child addict to the substance which is first introduced in a movie.
In conclusion, I personally believe that movies and television have more negative aspects than positive ones due to diffusion of harmful behavior among young people. Because of Teenagers' age, they are more exposed to this hostile effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...and movies have tremendous influence on individuals life. Although, some people count its p...
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Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...otionally than rationally. That is why, some of the movies and TV advertisement aim to gain...
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Line 2, column 257, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'misses'.
Suggestion: misses
...ter is crazy about Arrows and she never miss any sessions of this movie. Although, i...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'sees'.
Suggestion: sees
...A vivid example is my brother. While he see the TV program which have both good and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1357615894 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77010653185 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586092715232 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9013528514 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2352941176 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208954730929 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595116942591 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638062139039 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114612421121 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706413589764 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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