Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is universally agreed that human tend to live socially in order to have happier life and making friends is one of the evidence of this tendency. There are substantial number of people who are of the opinion that maintaining friendship with small number of people have great importance for happiness than making a lot of new friends readily. I personally concur with this statement and explain my viewpoint with three points as supports.
First and foremost, the concept of happiness are defined as to constantly have enjoyable time. When we spend more time with small group of people as called them our friends, we spend time to learn their characteristics which help us to trust them. However, our opinions may sometimes differ with each other. Finally, we accustom to the condition and gradually develop or relationship into creating happy atmosphere in which we all enjoy to communicate with each other. For instance, my close friend are less than the total number of two hands, but I enjoy to be with them. I Know them from more than 10 years ago, and we now get along well with each other. Therefore, with keeping small friendship, we make happily life for ourselves.
Secondly, making friend in a short time cause to end this friendship shortly because as we do not know each other, our behavior may hurt the other. As a result, in the period of being in relationship, these people are more likely to have tough time than being happy. A vivid example is my sister. she has a lot of friends, while she is not very intimate with all of them. consequently, She always is getting upset from the behavior of her friend, although I think they not as crude as she thinks.
Additionally, the depth of relationship is significant for happiness because people are more wiling to be responsible about each other in respect of the long time they be with together.
In sum, I believe maintaining friendship with small valuable friends are crucial to have happy life. This type of relationship have numerous advantages like creating respect,responsibility etc, which result in happier friendship than making new friend easily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy communicating'.
Suggestion: enjoy communicating
...eating happy atmosphere in which we all enjoy to communicate with each other. For instance, my close...
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Line 3, column 551, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy being'.
Suggestion: enjoy being
...an the total number of two hands, but I enjoy to be with them. I Know them from more than 1...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...ng happy. A vivid example is my sister. she has a lot of friends, while she is not ...
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Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
... is not very intimate with all of them. consequently, She always is getting upset from the b...
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Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is always
...ate with all of them. consequently, She always is getting upset from the behavior of her ...
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Line 8, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...all valuable friends are crucial to have happy life. This type of relationship ha...
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Line 8, column 175, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , responsibility
...umerous advantages like creating respect,responsibility etc, which result in happier friendship...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, i think, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90581717452 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81154019192 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515235457064 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7731596549 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3888888889 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0555555556 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348948201533 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1146655733 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816094651194 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20926602194 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651794250958 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.