Access to internet is necessary to lead a full lifr ? Give your opinion

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Access to internet is necessary to lead a full lifr ? Give your opinion

Surfing internet is the quintessential and cheapest source of collecting and using the information in the human life. All daily chores related to business, home and education surrounds around the services of internet. While it is believed that even though exploring internet is essential part, but, still the survival of human is not dependent on this. This essay will elaborate the above view in the subsequent paragraphs before delving to the conclusion.

predominantly, internet plays a pivotal role in the life of human being as a mode of interacting with the whole world. It boost up the level of globalisation and communication with people around the world. Besides, this is inexpensive way to extract the required data and utilise it for numerous purposes. To quote an instance, an survey was conducted by the queen university on the students who got education through distance learning and online courses. The facts revealed that even though, such students did not attend practical training like regular students, but, still they were encompassed with conceptual knowledge, which they got from online videos.

Undoubtedly, regardless of the fact that the all the activities of official and house are totally dependent upon the internet, but, it could not be considered and an obligation for survival of human. It is just a mode which make life comfortable, but, life is still possible without it. To exemplify, an article was published in " The Times of India" stated that there are several towns and remote areas ,which are not using the web services. Still they are leading the happiest life.

From my perspective, usage of internet in the daily routine activities at the office or home will accelerate the level of performing tasks and decline the consumption of time. Thus, it is vital to lead a easiest life, but, not mandatory to lead the life.

Pondering upon the above mentioned facts, internet is significant for performing all formal and informal tasks of life. Without it, tasks took a long time to complete. Such comfortness can be reduced to largest extent in case of no internet, but, the life remain consistent in a long run.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Predominantly
...hs before delving to the conclusion. predominantly, internet plays a pivotal role in the l...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'boosts'?
Suggestion: boosts
...of interacting with the whole world. It boost up the level of globalisation and commu...
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...umerous purposes. To quote an instance, an survey was conducted by the queen unive...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...there are several towns and remote areas ,which are not using the web services. St...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
... ,which are not using the web services. Still they are leading the happiest life. ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tion of time. Thus, it is vital to lead a easiest life, but, not mandatory to lea...
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Suggestion: the
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the largest'.
Suggestion: to the largest
...mplete. Such comfortness can be reduced to largest extent in case of no internet, but, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, still, thus, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11549295775 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81607029993 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554929577465 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.630340397 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.888888889 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7222222222 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0862751327955 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313023048622 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316257288316 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.056937719908 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273563631914 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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