You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there Write a letter to the tourist information office In your letter explain what you need say when you plan to be there ask for information about p

Dear Sir,
I am writing to inquire about the availability and pricing rental accommodation during our stay there and I hope you would help us find a perfect room

Since the summer holidays of my kids have already been started, we are planning to have an international outing this year. Visiting Singapore has always been first on our bucket list. However, we are planning to have a short vacation though, for only 8 days starting from the 3rd of May till the 11th of May.

Specifically, we require a single room flat with 2 beds, a kitchen and a separate washroom along with some basic cooking ingredients, as we prefer self-cooking at least once in a day. Furthermore, we would also love to have a TV and wifi while we stay there.

It would be of great help if you could provide us with a list of options along with the cost including taxes and other incidental expenses. In addition to that kindly include the cost of pick up and drop from the airport to the apartment as well.

We look forward to hearing from you.

Yours Sincerely,
Akilan

Votes
Average: 8.7 (2 votes)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, well, while, at least, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61375661376 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60160403432 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68253968254 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.5840444332 44.8134815571 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8888888889 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 4.34317383033 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141723040095 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588883578754 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476170191211 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085656873869 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448412135389 0.0580467560999 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.