The bar graph provides the information about the propotion of adults by varied age groups doing internet usage in daily routine between the period from 2003 and 2006 in the UK.
Overall,In graph it is clear that teenagers uses internet in highest propotion while old age people uses least internet.
On comparing, year 2003 and 2004 it shows that people using internet of age group (16_24)is 80% both the years show stability.
In (25_44)age group increase in usage is in 2004 of 60% while decrease is in 2003 of 50%.In (45_54) age group maximum usage is shown by 2004 about 70% while minimum usage is shown by 2003 of 60%.In (55_64)age group increase in usage in 2004 of 37%while decrease usage in 2003 of 30%.In old age use of internet is minimum in year 2004 of 15% while 2003 Donot show any proportion
On comparing,2005 and 2006 it shows that maximum usage is shown by 2005 in age (16_24) of 100% while minimum shown by 2006 of 90% in same age. In (25_44)age group increase is shown in 2006 of 80%while decrease in 2005 of 70%.In (45_54) increase in 2006 of 80% while decrease in 2005 is 75%. In (55_64) age group increase in 2006 of 45% while decrease in 2005 of 30%.In old age increase is in 2006of 20% while decrease is in 18%.
- The graph below shows the information on waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008. 73
- Individuals can do nothing to change society. Any new developments can only be brought about governments and large institutions. How far do you agree or disagree? 89
- The bar chart shows the percentage of dependents in five different countries around the world in 2000 and 2050 78
- nowadays men s sports are given far more attention by the society compared to women s sports What are the reasons for that Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 56
- The map shows the development of Meadowside village and Fonton over three different time periods (1962,1985 and present) Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 33.7804878049 166% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48444444444 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26293374534 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.382222222222 0.547539520022 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 3.36585365854 327% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.389918495 43.030603864 331% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.166666667 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.5 22.9334400587 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 5.23603664747 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273719473133 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175089340795 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725631456708 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195860216119 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565509761196 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.3 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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