The rendered diagram explains a way in which water filter is desgined and the process of producing clean drinkable water.
Overall, it is simplest form of water filter which undergoes scores of steps, beggining with pouring of impure water into one tank and ending up with potable water in another tank.
First of all, impure water is poured into the cylinderlical (iron/steel/plastic) tank by removing its circuler shaped lid. Next, dirty water gets divided into three layers of sand, charcoal and gravel. The top most layer is sand and the bottom one is gravel where as, charcoal is in centre.
In the next step, using an angled steel pipe, water gathered in bottom part of tank is sucked by pipe. Where pipe have its rear part and it goes stright up over the three layers with slight bend in between the water pipe then, it nose dives into another tank which is placed next lower to first tank. Finally, second water tank have nozzle on right side from where purified water can be taken out for drinking.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the simplest'.
Suggestion: is the simplest
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...er is sand and the bottom one is gravel where as, charcoal is in centre. In the next ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e next step, using an angled steel pipe, water gathered in bottom part of tank is...
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Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'noses'?
Suggestion: noses
...bend in between the water pipe then, it nose dives into another tank which is placed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74576271186 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25574479138 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604519774011 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5662024334 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279037991487 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138672301545 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824028320539 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196680157383 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507827034153 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.