The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
The diagram indicates the brick manufacturing process for the building industry.
Overall, as it can be seen the manufacturing process of brick has seven stags from digging the clay to delivery.
As is given in the flow chart, the process starts with digging and exporting the clay from the land. after the digger extracts, the clay put on the grid. The grid is the surface of the roller that used to separate and move the metal. before bricks creating, sand and water added to the clay. bricks are the result of wire cutter or mould. after producing bricks by the planet, drying must be happened by an oven for a duration of 24-48 hours. In the next step, the result of the previous section transferred to the kilns in moderate and high temperatures with 200-980 and 870-1300 degrees centigrade respectively. Products temporary stored in a cooling chamber for 2 or 3 days. after cooling and before delivery, the bricks must be packaging. Once the packaging completed, delivery vehicles can be loaded. delivery is the last part of the manufacturing process of brick.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: After
...g and exporting the clay from the land. after the digger extracts, the clay put on th...
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Suggestion: Before
...at used to separate and move the metal. before bricks creating, sand and water added t...
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Suggestion: Bricks
...ting, sand and water added to the clay. bricks are the result of wire cutter or mould....
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Suggestion: After
...are the result of wire cutter or mould. after producing bricks by the planet, drying ...
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Suggestion: After
...d in a cooling chamber for 2 or 3 days. after cooling and before delivery, the bricks...
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Suggestion: Delivery
...leted, delivery vehicles can be loaded. delivery is the last part of the manufacturing p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87362637363 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66540154851 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582417582418 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.388178134 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2307692308 112.824112599 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339614559793 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125246533402 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180965568309 0.0843802449381 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351875970982 0.15604864568 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.250636907848 0.0819641961636 306% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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