The two maps illustrate how Islip town centre will be developed from this moment to planned development in the future.
Overall, the town has most notably changed in road and in some facilities, which will be more arranged.
In the nowadays picture of Islip town, The facilities are divided into the north of the main road and the south of the main road. The countryside and a number of shops are placed in the north of the main road, while more urbanised facilities (shops, housing, park and school) are set up in south of the main road.
In the future picture, there has been a significantly renovation showed. The town will be surrounded dual carriageway road. Additionally, the main road will be replaced pedestrians that separate the north and the south buildings. In the north of the pedestrians, Bus station, shopping centre, car park and new housing will be built instead of shops from the north-west to the north east. The shops which are located in the south of the pedestrians are remained. In south of the shops, there will have added new housing near the old housing. However, the park, school and housing will be remain as they are.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You used an adverb ('significantly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('renovation') instead of another adjective.
... In the future picture, there has been a significantly renovation showed. The town will be surrounded dua...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... In south of the shops, there will have added new housing near the old housing. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and housing will be remain as they are.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55458411488 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8410620243 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7272727273 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0776586778108 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034294429745 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411435558823 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619693170143 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386683885334 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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