Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
It is true that many ex-prisoners continue to break the laws after being released back into the community. Although there are convincing reasons lie behind this, steps would be possibly taken to alleviate the situation.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that prison would not be the best solution of all for tackling crimes. Since prisoners are often mixed with other criminals, they would acquire a chance to listen to their stories of committing crimes, which in turn exert detrimental influences on those minds leading to the situation where they would turn to even more serious crime after imprisonment. Besides, a notorious criminal record would be another reason for those ex-prisoners to commit offenses. They find it desperate to seek for new jobs after serving long prison sentences without qualified skills and knowledge which meet the requirements of employers. Some would deliberately break the laws by illegally doing wrong such as robbery or even murder to obtain money to make their ends meet.
On the other hands, there are in fact possible solutions for this to avoid those who have been back from prison from encountering the same mistake. Non-custodial punishments would be implemented for those who do not commit the severe crime. Instead, governments and policy-makers would follow policies which are soft on crime such as fines, probation orders or community service orders in which they could contribute back to the community. Educational or vocational training would be also implemented in order to provide prisoners with needed skills ready for the comeback into society. This would increase the opportunity for those ex-offenders to look for employment after reintegrating back into the community.
In conclusion, imprisonment is not the ultimate approach for offenders to ensure they would not continue to break the laws post-prison, non-custodial sentences or educational training would be even more effective.
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- Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? 73
- Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education.Do you agree or disagree? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39672131148 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88663528395 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567213114754 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3597026494 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.615384615 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155782891225 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066431225637 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372711289803 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109857334101 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375814444336 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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