Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what type of neighbor is the best to have?
-someone who is quiet
-someone who we are similar to
-someone who is supportive
Use specific details and examples in your answer.
There are many kinds of neighbors that we meet, the quiet, the supportive and those who we are similar to. If I have ever the chance to choose my neighbors, I will certainly choose the supportive one. I am building my opinion on a number of reasons that I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of All, Neighbors, even if they are not the closest to our hearts, they are the nearest to us. They will be the first to knock their doors asking for help if we face any emergency or seek any support. I believe that we will not be comfortable doing so except if we already know that our neighbors are supportive enough and that we can easily break the ice between us. On the other hand, some neighbors are so isolated and quiet that we may not ask for their help even if the house was on fire! Last Christmas, when all my community staff are on vacation, I forgot my keys inside the business center including my apartment, car and business center keys and passes! I needed someone to open for me the business center and of course be familiar with me, otherwise he may speculate if I live with them in the community or not. The first one came to my mind was our friendly and always smiling neighbor on the first floor. At the beginning I was so shy to disturb him on the holidays, but I didn’t have any other choice. However, he was super supportive. He made me feel comfortable asking him a favor and rapidly helped me get my keys. If it was not for my friendly supportive neighbor, I would have stayed in the street.
Secondly, supportive neighbors help creating a better and safer community. This kind of people are always cooperative and do not mind tackling problems and trying to solve them even if it is not touching their lives. Some others are very negative, if the problem is not clearly affecting their lives, they will not move an inch. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter is influenced by a friend’s experience. 5 years ago, my friend’s building in the apartment complex was infested with roaches. Apart from the idea that roaches scare her, the whole building turned to be so filthy that we stopped visiting her. She tried to raise her voice several times to the leasing office, but they didn’t take any action until she united with 4 of her neighbors and they made a formal claim and raised it to the apartment complex mother company. In few days, the building was carefully cleaned and the roaches were eradicated. All of this happened just because they were supportive to each others which explains why I prefer this type of neighbors to any other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...which explains why I prefer this type of neighbors to any other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, apart from, kind of, of course, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 81.0 43.0788530466 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2136.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52542372881 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52779720113 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497881355932 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.9723337219 48.9658058833 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.714285714 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4761904762 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47619047619 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135043566839 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398415385807 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548837578198 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102746824445 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435599776974 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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