You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
ask your friend, to send you one of the photographs
explain why you need that particular photograph
tell your friend what happened to your copy of it.
Dear Mike,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I am writing this epistle to request for a photograph which we took while holidaying in Indonesia. Let me elucidate in detail.
Though I have reached safely back home however I am still in trance with the mesmerizing beaches and the beautiful valleys of Bali. The beautiful photographs which we took will rejuvenate the memories of the trip time and again. Although I have all the photographs we took, however, some of the pictures have been damaged especially the one which was taken on the top of the hill at Ullawatu temple. I believe you also took it from your camera so please send me a copy of that photograph. The photograph is one of my favourites and is different from other photographs we took during the trip as it was taken in the Indonesian cultural attire near the Bamiyan Lake behind the Ullawatu temple.
Since I had kept some of the photographs of the trip in the front pocket of my bag but unfortunately due to water leakage from a bottle, the photographs are spoilt.
I look forward to receiving a copy of the photograph at the soonest.
Warm wishes
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, Hope this letter finds you in the pink o...
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Line 4, column 284, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...e all the photographs we took, however, some of the pictures have been damaged especially t...
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Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...e Ullawatu temple. Since I had kept some of the photographs of the trip in the front po...
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Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... photograph at the soonest. Warm wishes Said
^^^
Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...raph at the soonest. Warm wishes Said
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62926829268 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66951860187 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580487804878 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0961394349 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2727272727 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136336989554 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553004668619 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767376413615 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721954092414 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594037074242 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.