You are facing a problem with your neighbour who is leaving rubbish near your house.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
- introduce yourself
- explain the problem
-Provide an appropriate solution
Dear Rama,
I'm writing this letter to you to draw your attention towards debris which is being left near my house regularly.
My name is Rehan and I've been living in this tower for last 2 years. My flat is in the rose tower adjacent to your house.
It's in my observation from past many days that you made is placing rupees collected from your apartment in front of the gate. Likewise, it has become a store house of plethora of insects which may profile to epidemic in our vicinity. Moreover, the place always experiences unpleasant smell.
However, there are various ways through them you can manage it. Firstly, our society provide the facility of collection of this with nominal monthly fee. Secondly, you can also keep it in the dustbin at the ground floor. It's regular collected by the cleaning staff.
I look forward to hearing a positive response from you. For the more it will help our society to be a more pleasant place to live.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Rama, Im writing this letter to you to draw yo...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Rama, Im writing this letter to you to draw your...
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Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...house regularly. My name is Rehan and Ive been living in this tower for last 2 ye...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...he rose tower adjacent to your house. Its in my observation from past many days t...
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Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this collection' or 'those collections'?
Suggestion: this collection; those collections
...ly, our society provide the facility of those collection with nominal monthly fee. Secondly, you...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...easant place to live. Yours sincerely, John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, likewise, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69411764706 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36689977246 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5202267434 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.3846153846 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0769230769 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172523223129 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606043365889 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740253905829 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819853999884 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555070910897 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.03 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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