People have different views about whether we are more or less depend on each other nowadays. In my opinion, modern life forces people to become more and more independent than they were in the past.
On the first hand, there are two reasons why it could be argued that we are more dependent on each other now. First, life is getting more and more complex and hectic day after day, especially because of the cost. Living cost for example, which is rising dramatically. Most of people cannot handle the cost by themselves. For that reason, both parent have to do a full-time work in order to tackle the living problems as well as to pay for their children’s educational tuition fees. Second, it is extremely challenged for young people, especially senior to get a job as soon as they graduate university. Thus, it is obviously reasonable for those young people to rely on their relatives in order to get nomination letter or start their career in their acquaintance’s company. Plus, instead of a bank people could borrow money from their friends or their relatives with lower interest rate.
On the other hand, people have to be conscious that they cannot usually count on family to live their own life as much as they used to, especially when they live abroad. For example, some oversea students are able to live independently without the supplies of their family, they could do part-time jobs to pay for the food and other costs, and those students got scholarship to handle the tuition fees. Technology is a factor that makes people nowadays become more independent. People could use technology in most of their routine from work to play. Therefore, with technology majority of people prefer live far away from their hometown or their country to acknowledge new things and become independently live their own live.
In conclusion, while there are some reasons about how modern life makes us depend on each other. In my view, I believe that we are more independent than ever.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
... example, which is rising dramatically. Most of people cannot handle the cost by themselves. F...
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Line 2, column 418, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... in order to tackle the living problems as well as to pay for their children's educat...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in my view, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87610619469 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64074249795 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510324483776 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6387642918 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2352941176 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228544646576 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091923401501 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076696339158 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19270855511 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974716589389 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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