Some people think individuals cannot do anything to make the environment different, others think they can. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The environment is crucial for an individual and the social. However, over the last decade, because of global warming, the earth is getting hotter. that is why the concern of the degrading environment is at the peak, resulting in a dozen debates on who should be responsible for the future of our generation. Some people believe that individuals cannot do anything to make the environment different, in contrary, others think that they should in charge of what they have done. In my opinion, I strongly agree that each people should team up the solve the environmental issues.
On the one hand, human activities are major factors causing the overhearing throughout history such as people agreed to all the factories did a massive product of vehicles to help them travel around comfortably, or they did not concern about the companies dumped the rubbishes and dangerous materials into the rivers and the oceans. Therefore, each individual instead of going by public transport, for example, buses, cars, motorbikes, and so on should go walk or use a bicycle to their offices. it not only helps people healthier and keeps fit but it also can be a word to say reject to companies using fossil fuels emit hazardous gases into our aerial. Moreover, a human can grow the trees in his/her house due to its huge advantages.
On the other hand, the government should take action for environmental problems because they have more power than individuals. For example, Belgium's authorities announced that polluting vehicles will not be allowed to enter the center city in order to reduce the emissions. This action immediately received many positive feedbacks from the city-dwellers and neighboring countries.
In conclusion, the problem of the environment should be tackled by both individuals and governments. I believe our nature will be cleaner in someday.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21523178808 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86875959058 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622516556291 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3701699264 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225801587531 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712305339739 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120457063899 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121665258227 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107875383887 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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