Given diagram describes how to produce a water clock. For these purpose we need a perpendicular stand with flat bottom,two bottles a straw and tap with water.
Overall there is 7 steps in the whole process, which will enable us to calculate time by level of water on the marks of the jar.
Firstly we will fix to the stand which have holes on the bottom and another hole attatched with a straw. Second bottle is placed directly lower to the first one, the top portion has been removed inorder to recieve water from first one. The tap is over the first bottle which will fill the bottle after blocking the lower outlet with finger.
Once the water fill up to the neck, it will start draining from the upper portion through the attatchment straw, at this point we can remove the finger. As water fells from the tap, it will eventually escapes through the both nostrils on the bottle; the water from lower portion will fill the second jar in which markings done. Time can be calculated according to the readings on the bottle, one mark stands for one minute. The level in first bottle will be constant and the other bottle can be drained and use again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , two
...d a perpendicular stand with flat bottom,two bottles a straw and tap with water. Ov...
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Line 4, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r. Once the water fill up to the neck, it will start draining from the upper p...
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Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ater fill up to the neck, it will start draining from the upper portion through ...
^^
Line 4, column 204, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'escape'
Suggestion: escape
... fells from the tap, it will eventually escapes through the both nostrils on the bottle...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51674641148 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12100465463 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555023923445 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3649501776 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0870581682502 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467733830131 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510266706496 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694485656584 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520173339302 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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