You are looking for a full-time job and recently you saw a job opening in an advertisement.
Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:
introduce yourself
explain what sort of job you would like to get
and say what experience and skills you have
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with reference to a job advertisement posted in newspaper “Times of India” dated 10th March 2019.I would like to apply for it and hope if you could consider me a deserving candidate for this job.
Let me explain the content of this letter in details. I am Rakesh Soni, completed bachelor degree in Civil Engineering from Mumbai University and looking for a job which will enable me to develop and increase the depth of Project Management knowledge and skills. I am looking forward for Project Control Manager Job where I can expect ample opportunities in my career growth.
I am Civil Engineer with 10+ years of work experience in construction industry with expertise in Project Control and Earned Value Management. I have good hand on experience of effectively using Primavera P6 software for preparing project baseline schedule, tracking and monitoring purpose. I am well versed with FIDIC clauses to understand and monitor project contractually as well. The job responsibilities you have mentioned suits my experience and skills.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Rakesh Soni
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| 2019-04-19 | rakeshsoni86 | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...es of India' dated 10th March 2019.I would like to apply for it and hope if ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e opportunities in my career growth. I am Civil Engineer with 10+ years of wor...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ct Control and Earned Value Management. I have good hand on experience of effecti...
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Line 7, column 291, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...edule, tracking and monitoring purpose. I am well versed with FIDIC clauses to un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, so, well, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33513513514 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0457720759 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643243243243 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2138714421 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232269633419 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950604351014 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818621142967 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154376765327 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417177868083 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 8.71597938144 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.