Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?
The correlation of success and wealth is always debatable. Some people think that the success of a person can only be gauged by his wealth and property possession. I think wealth cannot only be a characteristic to measure the success of any individual. This essay will discuss the role of wealth in measuring the success of a person.
No doubt, financial status is one of the indicators of gauging one’s success but it cannot be only indicator to measure success. The success of any person is best measured by his career achievements. Even if a person is able to earn good money but if he is not achieved anything in his career he may not be considered himself as successful. For example, one of the famous Indian cricket player Manish Pandey has earned huge amount of wealth through IPL tournaments but for him he is still unsuccessful as he is not able to qualify himself in Indian team squad for international matches. In other words, there are various indicators which vary a person to person for measuring accomplishments.
Accomplishing life objectives makes person successful. Every person sets goals in his life which he endeavors to achieve, getting these goal completed gives him feeling of fulfilment with himself in his life and that feeling of fulfilment is success. For example, a renowned singer Arijit Singh who battled hard for 10 long years just to compose his own song and when he composed that song he was quite satisfied that finally he achieved his goal and experienced the sense of success. In other words, accomplishments of one’s goal makes him successful.
In conclusion, material wealth is not the standard scale to measure success, all matters is that how a person is contended with his life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this goal' or 'these goals'?
Suggestion: this goal; these goals
... which he endeavors to achieve, getting these goal completed gives him feeling of fulfilme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, so, still, for example, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94539249147 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88749707247 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511945392491 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2989152778 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366423727857 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176624300834 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124197424844 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276859892889 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14002099532 0.056905535591 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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