As well as making money business also have social responsibility to what extent do you agree or disagree.
It has been seen that businessmen get involved in working for the society in addition to piling up money from their business. *It is believed that* entrepreneurs, should not only be working for making profit but also contribute to the society. *In my opinion, although profit oriented approach is necessary for the proper running of enterprises, yet, business should do more for community service than simply making money*.
*One pertinent reason* why business must make money is increased in cut-throat competition. As, a company requires funds in order to cover its running cost such as employees wages and payment for building and utility it is logical that priority should be given to money making. *Another point to consider* that, organisations also need to invest in improvements and innovations , if they wish to remain successful. *This is because*, if a company is unable to pay the bills and meet the changings needs of customers, any concerns about social responsibilities become irrelevant. *In other words*, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial health.
*Despite the above considerations*, companies should not be run with the sole aim of maximising bottom line;rather they have a vital role to play in society.one social obligation that owners and managers have, is to treat their employees well rather than exploiting them. *For instance* , they could pay handsome living wages to ensure that workers have a good quality of life. *Apart from this*, business could use a proportion of their profits to support local charities, environmental profits or education initiatives. *In this way*,company bosses would be contributing to society either by donating or paying taxes, which would be served as an act of kindness.
*In conclusion*, *no doubt*, capital is required for a firm, for the smooth functioning of it, yet, *I strongly believe* that charity and welfare works ought to be carried out by business runners, which would alleviate the revealing issues *not only* employees *but also* society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9504299713 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642424242424 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7336765878 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.846153846 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171392369797 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059299213378 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037908485992 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987886289211 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342281683803 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.