Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that young people are the most influencer part of each society and strong about getting their right. There are some main examples and reasons for this fact and I am going to mention some of them. Therefore, I, to a great extent, disagree with this idea that young people have today no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
First and foremost, young people have more courage and desire to stand up against injustice and political problems. Through a glance in the important revolutions in historical records, we can realize that most of those events planned and ran by young leaders. For example, the recent criticism surge in France, a huge number of young people who disappointed by the central government policies are organizing serious rebellion against capitalist policies. They utter that will not give up until achieve their goals.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that today, most political parties hire young experts as a central part of their decision making group. In the past, it was really rare to find a young minister, but now in all countries such as the United State we can find young members who conduct key roles in governing countries. Even in developing countries such as Iran, it is recently accepted that young people are professional person who are qualified to assign on challenging positions, For example, the ministry of technology govern by a 34 years old minister.
Finally, yet importantly, today the social and political communities are so active at universities. These types of experience highly training beginner students to obtain appropriate knowledge and information which are necessary in order to become effective members of society. Students learn to be sensitive about problems and oppose them when it is required.
On the basis of the reasons that were mentioned above, I am convinced that young people today have even more influence on important decisions that determine the future of society. It is because they have motivation and enough courage to seek for their wants, and some important roles are running by young ones, and because students’ involvement in academic social and political communities prepare them for further participating in community activities.
- People learn things better from those at their own level such as fellow students or co workers than from those at a higher level such as teachers or supervisors 48
- The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Do you agree or disagree? 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- TPO 14 78
- In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bout getting their right. There are some main examples and reasons for this fact ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, really, so, therefore, for example, such as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25866666667 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79921766848 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557333333333 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1800275932 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.466666667 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40063477744 0.236089414692 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128263796682 0.076458572812 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181325798673 0.0737576698707 246% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214274952062 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161957811939 0.0645574589148 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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