Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion
With the volume of crimes increasing globally. it is often believed that we cannot prevent it by taking any precautionary measures. this essay disagrees with this opinion as the number of can be reduced with the government providing better security measures and educating everyone about it.
Firstly, many of the crime records are observed in areas where there is a presence of low security and the victims in most cases are those who are vulnerable such as children, women and older people. Deploying more police personnel and installation of CCTV cameras will make such places secure and also raise a fear among those intending to commit crimes in those areas. In a recent survey performed, it was found that the presence of cctv cameras in a locality has reduced the number of untoward incidents happening in those places.
Secondly, we can reach out to those who might be involved in smaller offences and make them understand the repercussions of committing the crime. All over the world, individual countries can take measures to provide better education facilities and basic amenities to everyone. Additionally, counselling and job opportunities can be provided to those involved in petty offences which will in turn prevent them from getting involved in other criminal once again. it was found in a longitudinal study done over a period of 10 years in a locality notorious for many criminals, it was found that those provided with counselling and employment opportunities mostly did not get themselves in criminal activities when compared to those that did not.
To conclude, the crime rate can be reduced or prevented by taking many precautionary steps of better security and educating those who are more prone to commit crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, such as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14788732394 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82520782354 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552816901408 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4982572499 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.909090909 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156383050251 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642838284407 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386768730378 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107632244389 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449424152841 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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