Because of the huge demand of energy sources, some companies are pushed to search for oil and gas in abandoned and uninhabited places. In my opinion, the advantages for that action by far outweigh the disadvantages;Although it must not be our only solution for the problem, because not all remote places are to be damaged.
The advantages are quite clear,and that is to find energy to be used across the country,in factories, homes, and schools, etc. Thus, boosting the economy, stabilizing the country's condition, and making oil and electricity cheaper for the citizens.
On the other hand, disadvantages may vary from a place to another;Depending on its particular importance and the history it might hold. For example, we can not look for oil or gas in a land that is suitable for farming;As that destroys the land;Therefore lessening the crops outcome, hurting the economy even more, which contradicts with the main goal of the whole process itself.
Some other solution would be locating and using renewable, more clean means of energy, such as:"the energy of the sun, the energy of the wind, producing electricity from rivers and falls. It is obvious that those are a better source, although, in fact a lot more expensive. That being said,it is indeed a way more promising investment.
As to sum it up,a high demand of energy requires more places and areas to be investigated for such sources.Although,those places do not need to be completely damaged;Parallelly, looking for more clean and safer sources for future investments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, may, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15873015873 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32720525135 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7097947535 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324595935685 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107801763339 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931342586318 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168162630201 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821412995857 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.