Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment only government and big companies can make a difference to what extent do you agree or disagree
Environment is an essential part of our lives, a strong factor of it, and a matter of public debate. Thus, some people believe that they are utterly helpless and that it is up to the government and famous companies to improve it, whom they sometimes consider as a responsible for the regular diminishing of the environment quality, therefore are obligated to improve it.
While the government and the influential companies have a great responsibility on them,yet,I think that individuals play an important role in improving the environment.
Having both power, and an enormous influence on society, companies and the government are in need of working hand in hand to ensure the improvement of the environment and its demanding high quality, from using new technology to help detoxify the environment, to going as far as banning actions that may bring harm or affect the environment badly by anyway.
Although, companies and the government are in need for a better nature, individuals are not powerless. Because, every person can be their own "big company";In other words, if everyone in a neighborhood started gathering the trash around their houses,picked environment-friendly products over the normal ones,minimized their garbage;There then will be a deference to be seen in that particular neighborhood.
In conclusion, the government and big companies in fact play an undeniably huge role in improving the environment.However, simple individuals are no where near helpless;As they are an essential part of that process,starting by changing their behavior into a more environment-friendly lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, while, i think, in conclusion, in fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55241935484 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.66542460556 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588709677419 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.7329587376 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.714285714 106.682146367 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.4285714286 20.7667163134 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.2857142857 7.06120827912 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196243138353 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931913652402 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292400556582 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107653584102 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122200808806 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.0946893788 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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