is joint family necessary today?
Recently, the concept of the nuclear family and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. although contested by many that in comparison to the nuclear family, a joint family could bring many benefits for society, such topic is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by substantial numbers of individuals. I profoundly inclined to believe that the joint family is the need of the hour, and this essay will examine this view before concluding.
From the development standpoint, a joint family can provide society with some noticeable positive impacts, which are rooted in the fact that relatives, as well as family members, are extremely bound up. From my own experience when I was a college student, I performed a survey about the joint family which revealed that person staying in the joint family was happier and well behaved than those staying in a nuclear family. nuclear family face issues like loneliness, time management and family gathering whereas joint family has benefits like social gathering, ample time, care and enthusiasm. joint family inculcates sharing of joy and sorrow. Every individual in a joint family gets a companion with whom they can share their feelings which is absent in nuclear family. Thus, the beneficial ramification of the joint family apparently can be seen.
On the Contrary, Few people believe that the nuclear family gets personal space, privacy and independence. However, this can be achieved in the joint family too by mutual understanding and interaction. Nuclear Family faces a lot of issues like no help during difficult circumstances. Loneliness and not having ample time are major drawbacks of a nuclear family. Ignorance is another challenge faced by the nuclear family. Although, there are few benefits of a nuclear family the shortfalls are more.
To recapitulate, I pen down saying that although some opponents tend to believe that nuclear family is enough for an individual to be prepared, I strongly tend to believe that joint family has many advantages which outweigh its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41255605381 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84294322983 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591928251121 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9503133932 50.4703680194 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.111111111 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.5722876544 0.242375264174 236% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.26804795974 0.0925447433944 290% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635258915997 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.383006112071 0.151781067708 252% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114156764399 0.0609392437508 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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