Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter
– Explain why you are organizing the party.
– Describe what you are planning to do.
– Say how important it is to have your friend at the party.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> Dear Samar,
It has been a while now since, our last call. I really miss hanging out together. You knew I was expecting a baby and I am really sorry that I couldn't write before, I was not feeling well the last months.
I had my delivery two weeks ago. I know you will be mad at me for not telling you earlier but, It was an unplanned labour. Doctor was not sure about my due day cause of some complications.
I am well now and my girl is in good health.Ahmed and I are planning a welcome party to our daughter next week. I purchased bunting and balloons from an online store. my husband reserved some cupcakes
and pastries from a nearby bakery. My mother bought her a lovely pink dress with a gorgeous ribbon at the back, sure you will love it.
On Thursday afternoon, at the backyard of my villa the party is held.
You are the most important person, I want to see at this party, no excuses. You are like a family to us.
I cann't wait to see you on next Thursday at 4:00 in the afternoon.
lots of love,
Engy</span><br>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...-size: 19.36px;'> Dear Samar, It has been a while now since, our las...
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Suggestion: couldn't
...ing a baby and I am really sorry that I couldnt write before, I was not feeling well th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...due day cause of some complications. I am well now and my girl is in good ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ahmed
... well now and my girl is in good health.Ahmed and I are planning a welcome party to o...
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Suggestion: My
...ting and balloons from an online store. my husband reserved some cupcakes and ...
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Suggestion:
...kyard of my villa the party is held. You are the most important pe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t Thursday at 4:00 in the afternoon. lots of love, Engy
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...n. lots of love, Engy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86321061049 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0862463964 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.86666666667 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126059497954 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414244132068 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521276044663 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0595553837305 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604220516794 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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