You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir / Madam
I am writing this letter to complain about the bus service in the new South area in Dubai near Silicon Oasis. I want to bring your attention to the reliable service of the bus regarding its timeline There had been many delays in the last two weeks.
Usually, I rode your bus every morning to work at 9:00 am. Its number is 234. It is never late and always on time but unfortunately, the last two weeks there was a significant delay on Wednesdays and Saturdays. It arrives half an hour later than usual. I was frustrated and ultimately I reached my work too late. I spoke with the bus driver that admit it was not his fault and the bus went down on the high way and only rudimentary tools he had on hand. On last Thursday, While, we were climbing a difficult cliff by the end of the 10th street. There was a thunderous sound coming out of the bus engine and suddenly stopped. It took the driver more than 45 minutes to figure out the problem and fix it. All passengers were exasperated. Your bus company has a good reputation for years and very reliable. I am disappointed to see this happening.
I am writing all these incidents so, that you can tackle this situation. The bus need to be replaced with a new one as its engine is old and semi-broken. Even some of the seats are completely torn away. I request if possible adding more facilities as GPS tracker and emergency button, to easily solve any issues arose up quickly and in efficient time. I am waiting for your prompt response on that issue.
Yours Faithfully,
Engy Saeed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir / Madam I am writing this letter to complain abo...
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...een many delays in the last two weeks. Usually, I rode your bus every morning t...
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...am disappointed to see this happening. I am writing all these incidents so, tha...
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...its engine is old and semi-broken. Even some of the seats are completely torn away. I reque...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, while, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 286.0 206.0 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45454545455 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51396082483 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 127.690721649 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643356643357 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.409157378 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.7 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272601906557 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656250912985 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535525867054 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181903284327 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668302653604 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.