The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods.
To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays the tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown popularity of fashion clothes and conthes and consumer goods. I disagree with this issue for some reasons.
First at all, sometimes populer thing ia not always have good impact when in ceritain time. For example ia fashion clothes, for western bikini was good of use on summer and at the beach. but it not good for eastern, especially for Indonesian people because Indonesia was tropical country. another example, beer was free to sale in western countries, but in majority moeslims countries it was banned.
On the other hand, in globalization era human indeed have to follow current development so that always up to date. but human must keep to short out of goods ia good for themselves for example is the development of smartphone, it given many advantage to human to help themselves in many things, such as for study, work, and search the place with google map it will direct user to them destination.
On conclusion of these all is, human can not be free fr eras's changing, but they have to be choosen the things is good for themselves or it can given bad effect for themselves and society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...good of use on summer and at the beach. but it not good for eastern, especially for...
^^^
Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
...because Indonesia was tropical country. another example, beer was free to sale in weste...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... development so that always up to date. but human must keep to short out of goods i...
^^^
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'keep shorting'.
Suggestion: keep shorting
... that always up to date. but human must keep to short out of goods ia good for themselves for...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...the development of smartphone, it given many advantage to human to help themselves in many thi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'give' or 'be given'?
Suggestion: give; be given
...things is good for themselves or it can given bad effect for themselves and society. ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, as for, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78325123153 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54750778573 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610837438424 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8407355576 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.888888889 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159119319926 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901252820418 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.186770006304 0.0667982634062 280% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146709532123 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175813088845 0.056905535591 309% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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