The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods.To what extent do you agree?
It is true that many people try to imitate other’s way of living especially of the celebrities and famous sportspersons. They try to dress like them and use the products they use just out of curiosity to look them and be like them. I totally agree with the given statement, however, it is not only the material wealth like clothes and products that are being imitated but also their footsteps to become successful.
Many of us want to be like our role models and favourite stars, we simply look at their material wealth and try to adopt the same lifestyle. Seeing this kind of interest in us, many brands are commercializing their products by asking these celebrities to endorse them. For example, Sachin and ViratKholi (great cricket players) are endorsing for ads like Boost and many ads because of which their product is getting great publicity and their fans will be using them.
Not only celebrity, any person in our family who is successful is shown as a role model for us in our life by our parents, thereby most of the parents insisting us to travel in the same path as them, especially in choosing our career options (like the branch of study, job, etc). This is one aspect where I deny to follow them, because building our career should solely be in our hands and based on our interest and should not be forced to do it, saying that many are successful in that stream.
In the conclusion, I would like to say that, we must not only imitate them in physical attire and products they use, but we must also take them as inspiration and try to follow their footsteps to become successful like them if we are interested in the same field like them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'deny following'.
Suggestion: deny following
...y, job, etc. This is one aspect where I deny to follow them, because building our career shoul...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat many are successful in that stream. In the conclusion, I would like to say t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nterested in the same field like them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, for example, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57718120805 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48480812724 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503355704698 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.3653679647 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.555555556 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1111111111 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0559503693637 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289581543719 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324132184072 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0357954572562 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025065524995 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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