You had a good meal in local restaurant with your family. write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting.
Dear Sir,
To the Editor
I am one of the regulars in our local community, and this recommendation wrote by myself to other community for one of our great inn; The Lone Star Cafe.
In this spot, there were many impressive things when the first time I went there, such as the decoration with the artistic furniture and cozy milieu. I really like the on-site service. Moreover, I think that it was the largest size and quality portion I have ever met.
In addition, there had a professional service that I never see yet, and I am very keen to give in endorsement about the dishes served. I really...
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this recommendation wrote by myself to other community
this recommendation is written by myself to other communities
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