You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realized there were some problems with the job.
Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter
explain why you took the job
describe the problems that you experienced
suggest what could be done about them
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to inform you about some problems with a part-time job which for the position of a computer operator at your pencil factory. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate I am a student currently pursuing media studies from the University of Plymouth. since this is a full-time course and we are allowed part-time work for 3 hours per day so I took the part-time job of computer operator as I desperately needed money to support my studies since I come from a financially weak background. Although the job which I took was for a computer operator which included entry of data into the excel files, however, after a few weeks I was given the job of accounting and later on it was changed to sales. I wish to complain about the frequent change of roles which impacts my daily routine as well as my learning process about the system.
Additionally, I would like to bring to your notice that no such clause of frequent change in roles is mentioned in my offer letter hence I consider it unethical and unprofessional behaviour by management. Lastly, I would request you to look into this matter and assign me back to the computer operator position for which I was hired.
looking forward to your response and immediate action.
Yours sincerely
Saad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to inform you ...
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Line 4, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...tudies from the University of Plymouth. since this is a full-time course and we are a...
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Line 4, column 424, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rator which included entry of data into the excel files, however, after a few weeks I was...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...rator position for which I was hired. looking forward to your response and immediate ...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and immediate action. Yours sincerely Saad
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, lastly, look, so, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71555555556 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71584286532 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.0632602612 44.8134815571 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.1 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221718224921 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715541453114 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800885900213 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125824069284 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824174547053 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.