Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?
Economical, religion or racism leads to poverty in many countries. Several nations think that they should share their wealth with these poorer countries, to help and improve their people lives. Others believe is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to take care after its people.
On one hand, wealthy countries think that many sectors should be shared with un-wealthy nations, in order to provide assistance. First, they should provide food since several are facing starvation and this will lead to an unhealthy life, people will die, and many diseases will spread, therefore they must help in providing health treatment, vaccinations and medicines, especially for kids. Second, they need to provide them with shelters since most of them are homeless due to local wars or natural disasters. Moreover, education is one of the most important things they must share with, where teenagers and children's need to be educated and know how to read, write. For example, some African countries such as Ghana and Nigeria, people are facing poverty and starvation due to many issues in their countries, that’s why many organizations like UN, IOM and WFP are helping in providing assistant in many sectors in order to protect and change their lives.
On the other hand, several disagree with the point that wealth nation should share their wealth to poorer countries, since it is the responsibility of their governments. First, governments should help and provide a good way of living for its people, they need to open new job opportunities, where their citizens won't migrate searching for work and food. Second, they should stop stealing, wasting and corrupting their people money and start thinking how to build a healthy nation without poverty and starvation. Moreover, governments must provide security and education for citizens, these two factors will help them to feel safe and there is a reason to stay and made their best to support their countries. For example, the last few years, Ethiopia became the most developed African country by building and improving their economy and working to keep its citizens in their country, by providing jobs, security, education and healthy life, therefore people are encouraged to stay.
As a conclusion, some think sharing and assisting poorer countries is the best option to developed this countries and others believe governments should rely on themselves. In my opinion, I think if governments stop corruption and start working to develop their country even with the help of nations, to build a better and developed nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 100, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...untries is the best option to developed this countries and others believe government...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, i think, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2181.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24278846154 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66203685689 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475961538462 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.124644966 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.4 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7333333333 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364363067886 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139684540058 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981036467192 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249063946073 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096909391511 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.