TPO 27 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People have different attitudes towards whether to opt for an immediate secure job or wait for a more satisfying one. In my opinion, I give my vote to the former option. I feel this way for three reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, immediately taking a secure job certainly helps people to make ends meet in the short-term. As such, they have resources to pay for their basic needs like food, accommodation, insurance which cannot be afforded without monthly income. Besides, this amount of money allows employees to survive to wait for a more satisfying job to come. My own example is a compelling example. I had wished to work for a big oil & gas company. However, after graduating the university ten years ago, I started working for a small chemical company to make a living and waited for my chance to come. Two years later, I applied for a position at Repsol and have worked for them since then.
Secondly, people do not know for sure what a satisfying job is until they actually engage into tasks. It is likely that a dreaming job can turn into a nightmare when you really dive into it and vice versa an undesired but secure job may make us satisfied at later stage. My cousin´s experience exemplifies this idea. He graduated with financial background and loved to work for a big international bank. However, he had to apply for a position in an insurance company as a temporary option after he had stayed at home for twelve months without getting any offer from any bank. Gradually, he found that insurance is an appropriate choice which attractive perks. My cousin feels absolutely satisfied with his role and considers insurance his lifetime career.
Last but not least, people can learn new experience even when they work temporarily in an industry. This valuable understanding and knowledge may enrich his background and profile which in turn is helpful for their future application. For example, experience acquired as sale person may be useful for a future banker as he or she can understand better what their clients are in need of.
In conclusion, my view is that we should accept a job as soon as available. This is because we can earn instant money to cover our life and because we are able to gain neccessary understanding for our future career or by chance that offer can be as satifying as we wish.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 751, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...s role and has considered insurance his life time career. Last but not least, people c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, first, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7156626506 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69818105061 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55421686747 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3612636682 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9545454545 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8636363636 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216244566161 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658933791549 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053042956979 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125418989487 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519258853652 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.