Nowadays young people know less about traditions and culture than in the past.
What are the reasons for it? Is this a positive or negative development?
It is true that the younger generation today is less accustomed to their cultural roots and tradition than their peers were in the past. The main reason of this is globalization and I consider it neither good, neither bad trend.
With appearance of the internet and more affordable air travels, our world became much closer. As a result, some cultural traditions disappear and the youngsters prefer to embrace foreign customs especially western one. For instance, having unlimited access to the internet and foreign films adolescents are discovering worldwide heritage and their own traditions fade into the background.
Some people may argue that the tendency to forget their own roots between the youth has several disadvantages and it is a negative phenomenon for the society. This is because whole layer of a history will be probably forgotten and the younger generation may lose their cultural identity. In addition, in terms of customs, every country will be the same and very similar to each other, which is quite frustrating and reduce the charming of our world.
On the other side, it is beneficial that modern people are trying to look at life from another point of view in comparison with earlier generations. For instance, there are some traditions such as bride theft in Kazakhstan, which should be abandoned. Thus, if any cultural ritual would disappear, it means that it was redundant and old-fashioned and was not able to exist with modern reality. Any other people should accept that our world is changing, old traditions are dying and new ones are appearing.
In conclusion, it is generally true among today's youth to neglect their traditions and trying to find their own way of life. This happens because today’s society is more open-minded due to influence of the internet and opportunity to travel around the world and look at our life from other perspectives. Thus, both side of the argument have their own merits, on balance however, I think that it is a natural way of life and evolution of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, thus, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05621301775 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74400747915 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544378698225 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5868806411 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.933333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16372744541 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540608319903 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442687587116 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951056680966 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525034598713 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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