In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion?
The role of housing is widely debated with some people claiming that it is more essential to construct new houses in rural areas that to preserve it. However, I personally do not accept this, and I will explain why in this essay.
Firstly, I believe that it is more important to conserve the percentage of agricultural land , especially in places with high population density. This is because it can help in securing the required amount of crops for human consumption. For example, In 2015, research conducted by Cairo university showed that we need to have more farmland by 30 % because of our population growth. As a result, preserving rural areas can protect us from the risk of famine. Furthermore, we have to consider the environmental effects coming from destroying the countryside by building there. As a consequence, gas emissions will increase leading to an exacerbating in the pollution levels.
In addition, I feel that building houses in rural areas is less economically beneficial than farming it. The reason is that these farms can be used more than once a year to produce different crops, which will generate more profits and secure more jobs. For example, a report published by world newspaper in 2016 clarified that profits coming from the agricultural sector are 30 % higher than those coming from the construction sector in the United Kingdom. Therefore, Constructing in the countryside should be banned by law in order to help our economy. Finally, the psychological effects of destroying the countryside should be taken into consideration. That is to say, it can have severe consequences on the mental health of people to reduce their chances in enjoying the picturesque view of farms.
I do appreciate that some people think differently, saying that it is better to construct more homes on farmland, while securing enough houses is essential, of course, I feel this is a potentially unwise viewpoint.
Overall, I believe that protecting the countryside is the wiser course, not just for economic and environmental reasons, but also for its psychological importance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, i feel, in addition, of course, as a result, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18584070796 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03344218426 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551622418879 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2531054703 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.875 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184961360534 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526934490563 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401805707179 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101742031189 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016537591075 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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