now a days the way people intract has changed becaused of technology.in what way technology has effect relationship people make.has th became positive or negative development.
Peoples views about impact of on life technology continued to be controversial.Today,due to technology the way of social relationship modified.this development affected the intraction in many ways both negatively and positively.In this essay we will discuss the major impact technology had on planet.
Firstly,massive development of technology has lessen the distance between people because of smart gadgets. Peoples in any part of world,for instance,can connect each other without being any delayed with their far distant friends and family.Secondly,These are important source of information,however in most wealthy countries education has become totally technology based.In addition online education would be more common in world due to cost and time effective.Further, now a days telecommute is also used for home based work which also have many more positive impression on environment and society.
However,on negative side the communication with distant peoples on social media sites has decreased the the actual quality time peoples had with their friends and family which leads to anxiety and depression. Because of being strucked at on place eventual is foot step of aggression and frustration.Additionally,increased screen time for student and other people for work have many physical impacts on health brought with eyes sights and insomnia due to excessive use of electronic devices.and also on out door activities at educational institute and at work places.For example,recent research on library used by university students for assignments is decreased and students submit their work out before deadline.
All in all,Technology have both prospective positive and on contrary side its intricately depend upon use.But with respect to personal social relationship has infect mucher then any other.On upward side technology has lessen the distance and difficulties but on down sides have totally changed the natural lifestyle of people.
- When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointlessto try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 78
- some people think that music is good way to bring people of different ages and culture together. to what extend do you agree or disagree. 84
- Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies or interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree.Discuss both these vie 56
- The chart below show the proportion of British students at one University in England who are able to speak other languages than english in 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by reporting the main features and make comparison where possible. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81818181818 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.80164327158 2.80592935109 135% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601398601399 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.700638479 49.4020404114 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 277.333333333 106.682146367 260% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.6666666667 20.7667163134 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.5 7.06120827912 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207061292008 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112508036843 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666834672331 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129910616597 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697489265216 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.8 13.0946893788 228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.61 50.2224549098 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.2 11.3001002004 223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.36 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.99 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 23.0 9.78957915832 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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