Advantages and disadvantages of living in a big city

It is believed by some that living in a large city has many benefits, such as electricity and gas supplyments, entertainmental centres, educational institutions and etc. However, living industrial cities incudes many negative sides. Let's have a look some of these here.

To start with, education is the most essential part of our life. So, most of learning centres and universities are situated in big industrial cities. Also, you can get more information about them and be near to these.
What is the more, people in lage cities can go amuzing and enjoyable places, such as, cinema, theatre, park attractions and things like that.
In addition to this, inhabitants of urban areas are regularly supplied with electricity, gas and water. As a consequence, people are provided with satisfactory quality of life.
For example, majority of people try to live in large cities because of highly quality of life.

However, living in a large cities has drawbacks, too. In first place, the air in urban places is so polluted that it can be factor of unhealthy life. Therefore, majority of people in cities are moving to small villages.
Furthermore, life in large cities are more dangerous, noisy and with a lot of troubles. On account of this, being local people of the big city can effect badly on health of people.
For instance, crime rate in urban areas is higher than other places.

To conclude, living urban places has many positive sides and convenience, whereas it includes disadvantages, such as pollutted air, noisy streets, high crime rate and etc.
From my point of veiw, there are more positive sides of life in large cities than drawbacks.

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Average: 8.1 (2 votes)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08363636364 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7597005467 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8931885969 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6666666667 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27777777778 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208796788415 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713371803857 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713207669321 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859788842162 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636495697377 0.056905535591 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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