Modern technologies bring us a high quality medicine care, but using the medicine system would need a large expenditure from the government or every citizen. Some people think that the government should be responsible for a health care insurance, but the question is whether the government should pay the all or not.
Some good arguments in defence of encouraging people to take out private health insurance. Firstly, public health care spends the money of the government. Indeed, free health coverage for people who are able to pay their midical bill is a waste of public money. Secondly, people will only pay health insurance premiums if they know the value of their private health insurance. If they get sick, they will pay little or nothing at all. Finally, the privately insured are entitled to special benefits, such as having a better surgery and being able to take useful medicines.
On the other hand, unemployed and very poor people really cannot afford to pay private insurance permiums, which are often very pricey, should still be allowed as citizen to the best medical care available. They cannot be expected to pay their own medical bills. If the government provided publice health insurance and the premiums was affordable, people who have paid the premiums regularly should be entitled to have basic medical services.
To sum up, I think that most people should privately insure their health. However, it is unreasonable to suppose that all citizens can afford it. Therefore, a safety net in the form of a basic affordable health care system must exist for the very poor and the unemployed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, i think, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06367041199 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55791808203 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554307116105 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.769353737 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266914342762 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995238063715 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823808086963 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174503411438 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595143285018 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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