You rented a car from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a letter to the company and in your letter.
Explain when and from where you rented it
Describe how the accident happened
what kind of action did you take after the accident
Dear Sir,
I booked a car from your showroom for a six days short term trip to Murree with my family. Unfortunately, while we were heading towards our destination, we had a small accident. I am writing to report you about this accident.
On 5th April, I rented a car from your showroom located on Multan road for six day holiday trip with my family. The car was blue color, Suzuki Mehran with model no: LEB-18. I was driving the car steadily with normal speed of 100Kmph, when we met an accident.
It happened as a driver over took our car from the wrong side and hit with bang to the front bumper of our car. At once, I applied brakes and luckily, we escape a major accident. However, the car got a little dent on front bumper.
Immediately, I drove the car to nearby garage for repairing. After the car was being repaired, it was returned to showroom in good condition as verified by the staff present over there. Moreover, I received the expenses incurred on repairing the car because it was an insured car.
If you have any further queries, you can contact me.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Sara Batool
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| 2019-04-28 | Sara Batool | 70 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'April 2019'.
Suggestion: April 2019
...port you about this accident. On 5th April, 2019, I rented a car from your showroom loca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61463414634 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49795157007 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5911379979 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0666666667 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256554915952 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901186331306 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793709611201 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157789220927 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844782132624 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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