many government thinks that economic progress i their mot imoprtant goal. some people,however thinks that other type of progress are equally important for a country.
some government believe that economic development is their most important aim while many people argue that other kinds of progress are same important. Personally I think that, government all over the world should pay more attention to some others issue instead of just focus on the economics.
On the one hand, the government have some reasons for concentrate on develop economics. Firstly, the economic progress can overcome many problems in the country and help some others major develop sharply. The more money government have, the more they spent to improve some social services like education, hospital, or transportation, entertainment … it can be clearly seen that, economic progress can lead to many other types of progress. Moreover, the economic decide how strong a country is. If a nation have a developed economic it is mean they may not threaten by some serious problems from the others country on the market. In conclusion, economic development have a significant role in the exist of a nation.
In spite of the above arguments, I belive that other types of progress are important like the economic. A strong reasons is some problems or some major can not grow up just by money. For instance, education improvement need more than money, it is required the attention of the government and how they listen to the aspiration of students and school. Furthermore, some nation precious value is more important than economic. For example, it is necessary for government to protect and develop the traditional culture in order to remind the next generation who they are and where do they from.
In conclusion, economic progress is very important to the develop of a country but in addition, we need to pay attention to the other kinds of progress to keep the balance in every nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...conomic decide how strong a country is. If a nation have a developed economic it i...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... development have a significant role in the exist of a nation. In spite of the above a...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'reason'?
Suggestion: reason
...e important like the economic. A strong reasons is some problems or some major can not ...
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... economic progress is very important to the develop of a country but in addition, we need t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04362416107 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79080263424 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48322147651 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3816870956 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.357142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341405292669 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125174483251 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745997974502 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226535385603 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491451740371 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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