The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in
one town who rode bicycles in 2011.
The table chart illustrates the percentage of people at different age groups who used bicycles in 2011.
Overall, at all ages , the data for female cycling was higher than that for male.From 40 to 59 years old , The percentage for both genders were lower than those for other groups.
Looking at the table , the highest proportion of female cycling was 51.3 percent which was a little bit higher than the highest data for man from 0 to 9 years old.The second highest group was 42.2 percent for women and 24.5 percent for man at 10-17 group. The table witnessed a fell by nearly 30 percent for female and 16 percent for male after around 40 years .Then the figure for female riding bicycle started rising by 6 percent and for male rising by 4 percent after they reached over 60 years old.In addition the proportion of over 60 group and 18 to 39 group were slightly similar with 18.5 and 17.1 respectively for woman.In the year 2011, The lowest data for female was 12 percent, whereas that for male was 8 percent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, then, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55494505495 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23721103639 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565934065934 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 22.4926829268 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.408833413 43.030603864 319% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.25 112.824112599 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.5 22.9334400587 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117740700975 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131977502405 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138260437797 0.0843802449381 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160399372952 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149356517821 0.0819641961636 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.2329268293 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.0 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.9970731707 182% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.