An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be p

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An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. Since millet is already a staple food in Tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet.

The arguments mentioned here addresses the issue of Vit A deficiency in Tagus and concludes that the government of Tugas should promote the millet seed engineered by the organisation based on the reasoning that it is rich in Vit A. But many questions needs to be answered to assess the viability of conclusion.
The argument states that the seed is rich in Vitamin A but other parameters such as yield of the new seed. Yield is a very important parameter to assess the viabilty of a good seed. If improvement in Vit A, which is a quality aspect, reduces the quantity aspect which is yield, itcan pose threat to food security of that nation because millet being mentioned as staple food of that country. So, benefits of gain on Vit A content should be compared to effects of loss in other aspects.
Further, a food should have an essential quality factor associated with it which is taste. There is possibility that Vit. A increase can lead to release of protiens that reduce the taste aspect of millet and can therefore reduce consumer acceptance. Since the argument bases itself on the reasoning that people of Tagus will really adapt the new variety, the question regarding the taste can seriously undermine the viability of seed.
Even if questions of taste and yield are propitious towards the seed viability, the economics of the seed seriously hamper its viability. As mentioned the seed is costlier as possible solution tha the argument provides is through subsidies. The question that remains unanswered is about the institution that will provide subsidy. Will it be the impoverished government or the intenational organisation itself? If the responsibility is incumbent on the already poor government, the success of the program can be doubted.
The government in that case would have to think about the comparative costs of other alternative to fight the deficiency. The position of the argument in its last sentence implicitly states that there are no other alternatives to this problem. But there can be better economical and more viable.
The seed solution can be one solution to the problem but other altrernativ

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...states that the seed is rich in Vitamin A but other parameters such as yield of the n...
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...nt parameter to assess the viabilty of a good seed. If improvement in Vit A, whic...
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...d to effects of loss in other aspects. Further, a food should have an essential...
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...ously undermine the viability of seed. Even if questions of taste and yield are...
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...success of the program can be doubted. The government in that case would have t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, regarding, so, therefore, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 55.5748502994 83% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 2260.96107784 79% => OK
No of words: 355.0 441.139720559 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00563380282 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83231837467 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 204.123752495 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49014084507 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 705.55239521 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.5302588061 57.8364921388 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5263157895 119.503703932 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 23.324526521 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63157894737 5.70786347227 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207198278313 0.218282227539 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571904491143 0.0743258471296 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433673236359 0.0701772020484 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097957542141 0.128457276422 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298005702341 0.0628817314937 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.3799401198 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.3550499002 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 98.500998004 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Sentence: The arguments mentioned here addresses the issue of Vit A deficiency in Tagus and concludes that the government of Tugas should promote the millet seed engineered by the organisation based on the reasoning that it is rich in Vit A. But many questions needs to be answered to assess the viability of conclusion.
Error: organisation Suggestion: organization

Sentence: Yield is a very important parameter to assess the viabilty of a good seed.
Error: viabilty Suggestion: viability

Sentence: If improvement in Vit A, which is a quality aspect, reduces the quantity aspect which is yield, itcan pose threat to food security of that nation because millet being mentioned as staple food of that country.
Error: itcan Suggestion: than

Sentence: A increase can lead to release of protiens that reduce the taste aspect of millet and can therefore reduce consumer acceptance.
Error: protiens Suggestion: proteins

Sentence: As mentioned the seed is costlier as possible solution tha the argument provides is through subsidies.
Error: costlier Suggestion: costumer
Error: tha Suggestion: than

Sentence: Will it be the impoverished government or the intenational organisation itself?
Error: organisation Suggestion: organization
Error: intenational Suggestion: intentional

Sentence: The seed solution can be one solution to the problem but other altrernativ
Error: altrernativ Suggestion: alternative

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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 355 350
No. of Characters: 1742 1500
No. of Different Words: 170 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.341 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.907 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.781 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 125 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 52 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.722 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.697 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.299 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.492 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.068 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5