You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time. Write a letter to the editor. In your letter:
• Say which edition and when did the article appear
• Explain why you lost contact with your friend
• Say how you want them to help you to get back in touch
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to enquire about my friend with whom I have lost contact for the past few years. His name is Amit Sehgal and his accomplishments were published in one of your articles on 15th April.
Let me explain in more detail. Amit is a national level tennis player and is selected to represent India in the Olympics game. I read about this achievement in your summer editor released this month. He is my school friend but we are not in touch for a long time. This is because I migrated to another state with my family for better life prospects. I tried to contact him a couple of times but it seems that his phone details have changed. Additionally, I have dropped him several emails yet I have not heard anything from him. Therefore, I ask you to please help me in reaching out to him.
Particularly, I would like to know about his latest landline and personal contact number. This could help me to drop him a text or connect via call. Moreover, if you can also give me with his home address so I can try to reach him via traditional post. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need any further details.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Heena Parmar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44888888889 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47534409629 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.939614572 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.5625 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0625 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280093983993 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791879058588 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054551675 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160645556711 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608492852837 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.