Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots.
What is your opinion?
It is undeniable fact that, the world is changing at a swift speed. This change is an inevitable process and it is not always favorable. therefore, some people perceive that artificial intelligence will take over all the employment in near future. If questioned asked to me, I suppose this is just a myth and hence, differ with the statement. My inclination is elucidated in ensuing paragraphs.
technology is an invisible part of our life. Almost everyone heavily rely on computers and other technological advancement nowadays. So, it is also indisputable fact that technology has made many people redundant. For instance, banks were mainly dependent on their employees to maintain the records of all the customers and hence, needed more manpower. Needless to say, due to the invention of computers and internet, the same work was possible by fewer employees and therefore to save capital, thousands of bank employees were made redundant in early 21st century. Now general public also presume that eventually all the jobs would be conducted by computers with human like brilliance.
Granted, computers and other form of technologies has affected employment in many sectors. However, this does not mean that every single job will be performed by such brainy robots or technology. This is because all this technology are handled by none other than humans. Let us take the same example again. Though the computers were able handle many employees' work efficiently, it was an individual person who performed all the complex work. In turn, The robots are incorporated in the work that are hazardous to the workers. For example, Before robots, mine work was considered utmost hazardous. No one wanted to risk one's life in that kind of work environment. However, After innovation of robots, the same work become less risky due to the fact that the handler of the robot was none other than the miner.
In the end, I pen down by concluding that it is just a fear that people have. it is quite impossible to conceive a notion that robots and artificial intelligence will perform all the tasks in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i suppose, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04310344828 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79725549913 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0483118861 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7727272727 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174736756098 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450959018684 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707036029333 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115388301197 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381048890707 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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