A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• tell your friend you understand the problem
• explain what happened to you in the past
• Suggest a possible solution to this problem.
Dear Charles,
I’m glad to hear from you, after a long time. Also, I’m happy that your professional career starts from a reputed organization as a “Business Analyst”. It’s a good start.
From your previous letter, I perceive your difficulty in your current role, because of multiple projects you are leading the same time. The same situation I have faced during the beginning of my career. When I was working as “Plant Engineer”, I struggled a lot initially to finish the tasks on time. Fortunately, my Reporting Manager assisted me to get familiar with prioritization skills.
It is the stage where we should be transformed into a professional. Here, there is no training module or guide to assist you and you have to learn these soft skills by experience. At first, schedule your tasks with proper deadlines and stretch beyond your office hours, if requires. By reviewing your previous day task status daily, you can track your progress. But, relax yourself in the weekends to avoid feeling exhausted. In addition to these, consult your boss when you need any help, which will create a good relationship with him.
Hope, you will get back to me with more optimistic views soon.
Cheers,
Daniel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...r starts from a reputed organization as a 'Business Analyst'. It's...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17821782178 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93074324281 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707920792079 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1237410662 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7142857143 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4285714286 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244597734502 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729770580627 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783307700092 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136641711084 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686709897697 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.