In modern days, one of the controversial problems is related to whether children need to alone make a decision associated with things they every time do. Although some people strongly believe that making their own choices is dangerous for them, the rest of them, included me, tend to agree that it is absolutely better that every child has to deal with their own problems related to behaving. In this essay, I will support both views with reasons and represent a conclusion.
On one side of the argument, there are people who claim that choices that were made without control of parents can develop an anti-social habit. The primary reason for believing this is that because in most cases, most children have become arbitrary, they do not understand a situation for the economy of a family. A particularly good example is that when the new expensive fashionable clothes spread in the public, they want to buy it regardless of the financial potential of their family. This example is proving that not allowing their children a chance to do their own desire is needed for education.
On the other hand, it is argued that becoming independent from childhood is superb for their future. People often have this opinion because acquiring a skill to choose things that are needed for them is an essential force to manage their life. In addition, making a decision without obstacle gives a chance to identify their own interests. one important illustration is that it helped to know a skill that can distinguish smells that Coco channel who was the founder of the coco channel brand used to buy perfume himself when she was a child.
In conclusion, as we have seen, this question is uneasy to discuss. Generally, when children choose own choice, sometimes making a decision related to their consumption has a fundamental effect on their future and ability even though in some case, it affects the behavior of them by harm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
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Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to own'
Suggestion: to own
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in most cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88343558282 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60017776038 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539877300613 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7292679222 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.461538462 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261196333236 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897208011887 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782366332153 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162364843814 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232881749847 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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