A controversial debate which is raised about the most important years in one's life. Some groups of people hold the view that early childhood years may no be fulfilling for young kids. However, the other groups may take an opposite point and believe that is more fulfilling particularly at young age. From my vantage point, I concur with the latter groups and feel that indeed children can outperform at this age, thus it crucial for the early brain development.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that parent who take good care of their kids at this young age can improve their future performance. Children at young age have tremendous capabilities. They can perform many tasks which adults are unable to perform. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what was elaborated above is the language skills learning capabilities. Children are able to memorize not only vocabulary, but also grammar, and pronunciation. Thus, this makes them as skillful as native speakers. This type of skill may be hard on adults to learn.
The second reason which deserves some words here is that children can learn at this age to communicate with others at an amazing speed. Although such skills may be hard on adults, children find can master it. For instance, children who go to kinder garden, often find themselves playing involuntarily with other kids, and in no time they start talking to a bunch of friends. Ultimately, they become extroverted and are able to build a big network of friends as they grow up.
Although the aforementioned reasons are first to cross my mind, they are by no means the only reasons available. In fact, there is another subtle point which is worth to be mentioned. The noteworthy, refreshingly, intelligible statistics of a new study published in the American pediatric Journal. The study revealed that children at this age are capable of accomplishing twice as much tasks as adults. This study was conducted on 120 children from different schools to prevent any bias.
To wrap up, contemplating the aforementioned reasons, one soon realizes that children at this age are capable of performing outstanding tasks beyond human capabilities. These tasks would not only dazzle the parents, but make them proud of their accomplishments.
Essay Categories:
- Integrated writing (TPO 44) 73
- TPO 24 Integrated TOEFL Writing 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A good leader should spend more time listening to other people's ideas than taking his or her own ideas. 81
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person's childhood years (the time from birth to twelve years of age) are the most important years of a person's life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 3
- television has positive effect on our society 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...aised about the most important years in ones life. Some groups of people hold the vi...
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Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...the view that early childhood years may no be fulfilling for young kids. However, ...
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Line 7, column 382, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...e are capable of accomplishing twice as much tasks as adults. This study was conduct...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...em proud of their accomplishments. Essay Categories:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, thus, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07387862797 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85533236454 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5672823219 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6775727183 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4090909091 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2272727273 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40909090909 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0901983123468 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0269626736251 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407017795254 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0526298190075 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454188028136 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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