Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products.Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong time cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have differing views with regard to the question of whether or not animal testing should be done.In my view, animal testing is morally wrong but if done in limited amount considering the suffering that animals experience, it would directly help in the advancement of scientific and medical knowledge.
On the one hand, animal experiments is necessary for medical testing of new drugs and other products safety. It aids reserchers in finding drugs anf treatments to improve health and medicine.Many medical treatment have been made possible by animal testing, including cancer and HIV drugs, insulin, antibiotics, vaccines and many more. For example: Alexander Fleming discovered the first antibiotic penicillin by experimenting in mice which has now become a first class antibiotic for the treatment of all types of bacterial infections.Therefore, animal testing helps in the development of medical and scientific knowledge without human suffering.
On the other hand, humans have no moral right to conduct experiments on animals.Every living beings lives and rights should be respected. Experimentation on animals don't justify the suffering caused on them. In many countries, testing of cosmetic industry has been banned .Animals are kept in an artificial environment and even killed for observations for testing, which clearly indicates not valuing animal rights. So the researchers should aim to minimize the suffering that animals experience and testing should be done in a limited way.
In conclusion, it is necessary to conduct animal experimentation however, their rights and minimization of suffering should also be kept in mind
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my view, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.612 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16700236817 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.5953581347 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.888888889 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7777777778 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2222222222 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330454400652 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150081491457 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666319525155 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198562517385 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704959737631 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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