In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What are the causes of these problems and what measure could be taken to solve them?
There is no doubt that obesity is soaring concern faced by countries in recent time. This essay delved in to casuses of this problem and try to suggest some of counter measures to prevent and solve this problem.
Firstly, Today, in this cut-throat competition people have become workaholic and give less time to themselves and their family. This is because high amount expectations from family, employer and high goals for life.To illustrate this, many people do not have home cooked food so they have to relay on ready made food available in market. These food have high calories, fat and protein which makes them obsess. Secondly, due to long working hours they left with no time for physical exercise, which will increase their weight more and more. Thirdly, a medical research was conducted on workaholic people and found that stress they face also plays role in increasing the weight.
However, this problem is not insurmountable, there are certain steps need to accounted. To begin with, people must set their schedule which includes time for regular physical exerciser,and time for their relaxation. These will allow them to control their weight. Furthermore, They should try to live satisfied life. this will stop their workaholic behavior. For an instance, it has been proven that, people who are engaged in regular exerciser are likely to face this obesity problem in their life. In addition to that, some time obesity is caused by some biological issue then one must consult the doctor to overcome this problem.
To sum up, there is saying "Health is wealth". So, to have healthy and wealthy life, it is one's responsibility to control their weight by means of measure suggested here.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, in addition, no doubt, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10676156584 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56383898649 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594306049822 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9431006388 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6875 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196185235204 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689874967241 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445212612576 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120241158027 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262270822399 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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