You arranged a delivery to home. But there are some problems with the delivery. Write a letter complain to the manager of the delivery company.
In you letter, you should write
• describe your order
• describe the problems with the delivery
• suggest what the shop should do
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name Sushmi Shrestha and I am regular customer of your store. I am writing this letter to complain about home delivery that has not been fulfilled yet.
The delivery order is DL12345678 and was placed two weeks ago on 20th March, 2019. The type of delivery was standard and delivery item is IKEA couch Model Number 12345.
The standard delivery was meant to be happen within a week. But even after two-week, the couch is not delivered to my house address. I bought a couch for my living room to accommodate more people for coming house party that been already planned on next weekend.
I am exceedingly displeased and would like you to check the delivery status and if you cannot deliver the order in another couple of days, I would like to cancel my order and get the full refund with delivery cost.
I hope to this situation will be resolved urgently.
Yours faithfully,
Sushmi Shrestha
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'March 2019'.
Suggestion: March 2019
...78 and was placed two weeks ago on 20th March, 2019. The type of delivery was standard and ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...em is IKEA couch Model Number 12345. The standard delivery was meant to be happe...
^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the full refund with delivery cost. I hope to this situation will be resolved...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75308641975 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36631597703 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641975308642 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8204976971 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247955970209 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843075459756 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876698070255 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119183483444 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884769293955 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.