people sleep less than before in many countries why do people sleep less what effect does it have on individually and on society
Sleeping is an half part of our life.In some Nations, people usually sleep less than normal night time .this concerns may rises many questions like what is the reason for more wake up and effects to the people and public.
coming to the matter behind let's sleep this is major condition or situation to many employees as well as students. for instance, most of the software engineer and call centre employees were facing this because of night shift me gradually shuffle in this in turn leads. secondly, students wear preparing from night before exams, but also usage of smartphones. For example, students whose spent lot of time on an addiction of smartphones they did not to know about time on night it seems to less sleep.
turning into effects on single and public its above paragraph has written the progression of the lesser slept that tends to many health issues as well as Nation development firstly health damages by continuous this day to day main severe eyesight increase behaviour showing less sleep gets to the day time low work efficiency after company should get fall down the profits and effects on the country advancement.
to conclude, all the employees and students are concerned this effect by distance to as well as country development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Sleeping is an half part of our life.In some Nations,...
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Sleeping is an half part of our life.In some Nations, people usually sleep less...
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...sually sleep less than normal night time .this concerns may rises many questions l...
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...and effects to the people and public. coming to the matter behind lets sleep this is...
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...nd effects on the country advancement. to conclude, all the employees and student...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91079812207 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46674190442 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657276995305 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.46960512 49.4020404114 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.428571429 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4285714286 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4285714286 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25529711866 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105315305075 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095785896941 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153047535899 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981662770232 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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